一、為什么我寫的句子總是有點不通順,有點病句的感覺
天天保持寫日記,鍛煉自己的觀察能力,寫的時候,就當是演講,多認真一點,必須堅持。
說實話,文化確實很重要,我男朋友初中還沒畢業呢。表達能力確實差太多了。現在正在鍛煉呢。
多寫字,對說話有好處,寫字是個漫長過程,頭腦里的事情,想過了,才寫出來,要比說要長一些時間,寫的不好,還可以一個字一個字去推敲。慢慢鍛煉自己的寫作能力。
讀書是必備的,增長知識量,重要的是記住知識,可以寫下來,可以摘錄好的內容。
最重要的,是堅持!要有毅力,不要間斷!
二、請英語高手幫我改改我的作文
好像是 she is a girl of a small build,our teacher was always baised toward and she was my classmate when i was a child .
In teacher's eyes ,she had many merits,for examples,studying hardfor achieving her aimes,being biunt with teachers, and being civil to stranger. But what about me,being always laying the blame on others when I made mistakes, also being blamed for lazy and many other wrongdoing * bias which teacher against made me shoulder so many heavy burdens that bring about the falling in my score and the losting with the self-confidence.
However this trend didn't continue when I received a tip from her,my classmate, on which said :”cheer on! I believe you! “ at the same time,she racked her brain to cheer me up and encourage me. Enventually with her acid, I had being believed in myself and finally the examination brought out the best in me. Looked the ideal score, I bursted into tears.
Al though long time has passed , I don't forget the days of brilliant sunshine when I studyed together with her . but for her, i didn't do anything for her and i couldn't reach my achievement.大概是這樣吧,但我只改了前面和后面而已,有可能我還給你改錯了呢,如果改錯了,那就sorry sorry 啦!
三、幫忙中譯英(不要用軟件,軟件翻句子不夠通順)
Hello,i am a girl form * name is XXX.I like your movies so much,especially the role of XXX.I think the dignity of him are completely demonstrated by *g forward to your new * you work hard and bring more surprising to us *.I will always support you!。